To whom this rhythm of our hearts seek?
Art work by (c) Jacqueline Howett |
To whom this rhythm of our hearts speak?
To whom the river of our hearts to seek?
Amidst the empty shell now peaceful sleep,
No longer flow the tears on earth to weep,
A new beginning, a new peak to reach,
The struggles upon upward climbs, who greets?
And this revealing light beneath my feet,
Each step knows we have crossed a timeless fleet.
(c) By Jacqueline Howett
Art work by (c) Jacqueline Howett |
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I can feel the beat of this poem, its rhythm. Heart-felt. For sure we never know just who wll be greeting us as we 'climb.'
ReplyDeleteThanks Mary! I appreciate your comment! :)
DeleteThe wonder and the majesty of life, beautifully crafted.
ReplyDeleteThanks Talon! I like your feedback!
Deletesmiles...there is a really cool rhythm to this...which plays well on your first line...and i really like the light of the feet...and its symbolism...
ReplyDeleteThanks Brian! Glad you liked it! I appreciate your comments on rhythm! :)
ReplyDeleteLots of questions and few answers, but a coherence nevertheless... So lots in this!
ReplyDeleteThank you! I appreciate your comments! :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you Analisa! Have a wonderful 4th of July! :)
DeleteThis is lovely, Jacqueline.
ReplyDeleteThanks Medeia! I'm glad you stopped by! :)
ReplyDeleteHave a nice week!
I love both the rhythm and message of this lovely poem.
ReplyDeleteMadeleine Begun Kane
Madeleine, thanks for stopping by! I appreciate it! :)
DeleteWhat a beautiful poem, lovely! xoxo
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comments! Enjoy your day!
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